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Story: The Candle in the Wind….(Final Episode – Episode 17) ( By Oyekunle Lizzy Oyebola)

The Candle in the Wind (Final Episode)

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the candle in the wind

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Episode 17 (Final Episode)

It had been three hours now that we had been praying but mum remained motionless.

It seemed that our prayers weren’t even reaching the ceiling!

Was I the cause of it all?

Did I need to increase my faith?

How do I do so?

My brothers still prayed on although it was obvious that they were getting tired.

The whole floor was filled with perspiration and tears.

“God, I am getting tired but your word says in Isaiah 50 verse 7 that Mr. Douglas read that ‘For the Lord God will help me, therefore shall I not be confounded, therefore have I set my face like a flint and I now that I shall not be ashamed’ we have set our eyes like stone today and we wouldn’t want you to drag your own holy name in the mud because you are able to do exceeding abundantly above all we can ask or think” he prayed on.

If nothing, I was very sure of my brother’s great intelligence when it comes to cramming things.

Everything he was saying now was what Mr. Douglas had said and he had retained them in his own memory.

When I couldn’t even remember much!

We heard the gate opened and I ran to the window to check.

The doors of a sleek, black car opened and two men and a lady ran inside.

Those men!



“Dad is here” I announced and my brothers looked up.

“Glory! Maybe God would respect his own anointing more” Ruby said, standing up and wiping his sweat

“Exactly, ‘cos it’s a must that mum wakes up” Gem said

“Yeah. I hadn’t seen mum in months…I mean long months here and never would I be able to forgive myself if we don’t get to see again. I won’t forgive myself! Never!” Ruby took it personal once more.

“For goodness’ sake, mummy isn’t even 60 yet” Gem said

“60? She is just in her early 50s and God promised that with long life would he satisfy us…is God then a man that he should lie?” Ruby asked again, sharply

“No” Gem and I replied him and he shook his head.

There was a knock at the door.

We hesitated

The knocks became louder

They became more rapid

“Who is there?” I asked

“Dad” he replied and I ran to the door.

I opened and saw my father at the door with one fresh guy and one beautifully huge woman like Queen Lateefah!

“Dad” I exclaimed as I jumped into the arms of my father.

I sobbed as I perceived the dew on his pajamas.

Dad had gone to pray alone again!

See how haggard he looked!

Long neck, his hair formed small lumps on his head and he looked unshaved

He must have been gone for long.

He was weeping too and I realized that there might be no hope.

God must have spoken to him.

If dad should say that it was God’s will, that means, we would just have to accept it.

“She’s dead?” he asked and I nodded against his chest

“Yes!” I replied again and dad sat on the floor, weeping profusely

My heart melted and I knew that was all!

It was just too late.

It seemed that Abigail was just too skeptical but for real, she was damn right!

If dad could wail someone’s loss, that was all.

“God gives and he takes away” he said

“No!” Ruby said as he joined us at the door, Gem closely behind him.

“She can’t be dead! Never! God didn’t take her away. Sickness did!… and since the time of John the Baptist, the Kingdom of God suffereth violence and the…”

“…violent takes it by force!” a very weak voice said and Ruby gave me a thumbs up as if I was the one that had completed it.

It wasn’t me o

I didn’t even have much verses in my memory any longer.

So whose voice was that?

Was it this aunty?

She looked huge; her voice should be very deep!

It can’t be this uncle…

it was a female’s voice.


Nobody seemed to notice.

“Dad, I can’t believe you are giving up already. Aren’t you coming from a prayer programme? So, where is your faith? Where was all you had taught us? Where is your faith?” Ruby asked on

What cute audacity it was!

Dad bent his head and wept hard.

“I am sorry” that was only what he said as he sobbed loudly

“God doesn’t just seem ready to forgive me all and erase all my sins out of my remembrance. I had really failed in my responsibility. I threw you away all in the name of western education even when God was saying something else. I disregarded my wife’s advice and she was treated like an outcast…. Like a candle in the wind” He paused and wept some more.

We all joined in the crying exercise.

The candle in the wind!

That really described mum

It really did!

“If my wife died, it would be for God to punish me and teach me that I should always put my family aright before my ministry. It would be an unforgettable experience for me…I have been away for about a month now and since God still allowed her to go, then, who am I?” he cried.

“Who are you? You think you can really survive without the support of this woman? You think so?” Ruby charged at dad

“I don’t think so son. I know I would fail” Dad replied obediently.

“So, why not fight for her life? Why not, so you make all things work together again?”

Ruby was very desperate and the huge aunty watched on with a very great interest, nodding her head with great enthusiasm.

“Why not let’s pray again? Why not let’s call on God once more? If God could heal mum and bring her back to life, we have promised to serve the Lord with the whole of our hearts. If not…” he shook his head and dad looked up at him, obviously broken hearted

“God is good my son no matter what happens” he said

“Yes I know. Gideon asked for signs from God and God gave him. I am asking for a sign from God now to confirm to me that he is good. The sign I request isn’t much, eternal breath should enter into my mum’s body and the vital organs which are faulty in her body should be brought back to life. That’s the sign I require” he said again, his chest rising as he spoke.

“Oh my God!” Dad cried out.

“I agree with you” the huge aunty said

All eyes turned to her…her spoken English command was killing!

She must have great alto…or bass!

“God has to raise her as only there and then can Tony and I get married. She is going to be the Mother in Israel that day” she said and the fresh guy looked at him.

He blushed!

Was he the Tony?

“I agree too” the guy said.

Dad stood up gently with Gem’s help.

“I agree too” dad said

“Me too” Gem said

“Me too” the weak voice said again.

Ruby looked at me and smiled faintly

“Haven’t you said ‘me too’ before? Why are you saying it again?” he asked and I frowned

“Does that sound like my voice? That was not me o” I said

All eyes were on me.

“Who spoke then?” Gem asked

“I noticed that voice too when you were saying violent suffer or suffer violent or something…I wasn’t the one o.” I explained.

“Maybe it’s Abigail then” Ruby said

“Or mummy” Gem said and Ruby looked at him and shook his head

“You think we are joking here?” he asked almost provoked.

Gem shook his head.

“I wasn’t joking either.” He said and Ruby shook his head still.

“Let’s go downstairs and pray please. This is just an unserious boy” Ruby said and everyone started moving towards the stairs.

“But wait everyone.” I called out and everyone stopped again

“what do we want to go and pray about?” I asked and Ruby chuckled

“See question o. I thought you said you agreed to pray for mum” Ruby said

“Fine, I agreed but we are just like the disciples in the bible because if I know nothing in the bible, the day a bible study teacher came to teach us about this subject, I can never forget!”

“What subject?” dad asked

“The disciples were praying after Peter was arrested and was in jail. They were praying for his release and God heard them. There was a knock at the door and Rhoda went to check. By the time she saw Peter, she rushed back to tell them it was him but they told Rhoda that she was this or that. It meant they were not praying with faith” I explained in my own way

“So? What are you saying?” Ruby asked, confused

I never really knew how to explain things

I knew I wouldn’t do well if I was a teacher

“Why could it not be mummy?” I asked and they all looked at me, surprised.

“What!” dad exclaimed

“When Gem said it might be mummy, why did you think he was joking and you even said he was just an unserious boy? Why?” I asked, tears gathering in my eyes

I hated it when people don’t seem to understand my point.

“Ok, you are saying mummy could be alive?” Ruby asked.

“Yes” the weak voice sounded again and I widened my eyes, nose and mouth altogether.

“That wasn’t me that spoke again o. it wasn’t me. Mummy must be alive! She must be!” I almost screamed as I pushed Gem out of the way and rushed inside.

My heart jumped into my mouth!

I searched for my voice to no avail!

By the time I found it, it came out very silently

“Mum!” I called out.

There she was, smiling faintly, still lying on her back

“Baby!” she called out weakly.

“It’s impossible!” Ruby exclaimed as he jumped inside and went towards the bed

“Sweetheart” Daddy called out and mummy smiled faintly.

“My love” she replied, holding her hands towards him

“Oh my God!” The uncle exclaimed and the huge aunty fell to the ground and started rolling, speaking in tongues

“I saw Jesus!” Mummy said faintly.

“Oh my father!” Gem rushed towards her and fell on her too, crying profusely

“One Doctor came to me with two nurses behind him.One nurse held a tray that contained a new liver, lungs, kidneys, womb and all other internal organs with about four large packs of blood and some tubes. The other nurse held an empty tray.”

She paused as she rubbed her husband’s head and patted his back.

“The doctor removed all in my inside and oh God! It was so rotten and black!” she said, irritatingly.

I could only imagine

“After the removal, he used a tube and one machine to drain all the black blood in my body after which he removed the fibroid. It was very big!” she said and I shook my head

Is God really real?

I had only watched this kinda thing on Christian Television Channels.

“He dumped all these in the empty tray and started transfusing blood for me. After that, he replaced my internal organs with the new ones and told me to go back” she completed her tale and Ruby who had started crying increased his cries from gear to gear.

“Oh God is wonderful!” I cried out loud.

God heard the prayers of this dirty filthy rag!

His prayer point exactly!

“I surrender all…I surrender all…all to thee my blessed savior, I surrender all…” Gem sang on and we joined him.

“I will worship forever, love him forever because this God is too good o” The huge aunty sang sonorously and we joined too.

“He’s too good” Dad cried too, rolling on the ground.

He spoke weakly.

Just then, there was a loud fart from the bed and we all turned to look towards the bed.

It was mum!

She farted and it was brutal!


The uncle laughed and rubbed his hands together.

“It must have been a really great surgery that Doctor Jesus conducted. After all successful surgical operations, the patient must fart. God is beautiful! she just farted now” he explained and I nodded.

It was strange to me.

Sure I was in the medical line and what he explained was not new to me..


I wondered how operation would be conducted in the spiritual realm and then it would take effect physically this way!

God must be really huge!

“Looks like she has fainted” The uncle announced again and we all rushed towards her and held her different body parts.

“Someone should switch on the air conditioner please and give me space.” The uncle said again as he walked to the wardrobe.

He brought out two saline drips and the intravenous lines and after injected a particular medicine in it, he set the line in mum’s hands and he smiled at us.

“God has done what no man can do” The uncle said.

“Oh yes! But your face looks familiar uncle” Gem said

He smiled

“At John Hopkins?” he asked and Gem smiled

“That’s it! I knew it” he exclaimed and hugged him

“You are the intelligent radiography students in our college” he said as he patted his back

“And you are the number one youngest gynecologist there. It’s an honor to meet you here holding my mum” Gem said again and he smiled

“I never knew all these about you” Pastor said and the uncle smiled again.

“You will know everything soon sir” he said and looked at the other aunty who was busy caressing mum’s hands.

He whispered something into Gem’s ears and he smiled

The duo went on their knees.

“Please say yes Precious” they chorused together and the aunty faced them.

She smiled and shook her head.

“Why should i?” she asked, playfully

“Because God is good and so that mum would be the mother in Israel that day” he said and she twisted her nose to a side

“Just that reason?” she asked

“And because he loves you” Gem said sweetly

“Yes I do. I love you so much. Please say yes!” he cried out

Precious smiled and faced mummy.

“If mummy says yes, I will” she said and Tony arched his brows.

“Mummy, should I say yes to Tony?” she asked and almost like a magic, mummy nodded, trying to adjust her head on the pillow.

Someone who had fainted o!


All was just amazing to me

Tony and Gem screamed while Ruby looked on, a bright smile on his face.

“Mummy said yes” Tony and Gem screamed almost together and dad smiled.

“Alright then, I say yes” Precious said and we all clapped happily.

Abigail entered through the door too and clapped, a huge smile on her teary face.

What was she crying for?

I could only wonder

All that had happen today really did worth crying for though!

“I am happy for you guys. Congratulations” Ruby said and the duo smiled.

“Oh my God, thank you because all is falling into place for my family and these children of mine” pastor said, his hands clasped together as he focused on his recuperating wife

“When would you guys be going back to the United States?” Tony asked

“Not any time soon. We are all done with schooling though, so going back to the US would be on a visit” Ruby said and we nodded in agreement.

Tony laughed

“When are you going back too?” Gem asked Tony and Precious looked up immediately.

“Anytime from now” he said.

Precious frowned and her face dropped.

“It seemed aunty isn’t happy about that o” I said and she gave me a “who sent you” look.

Tony smiled

“Should I stay?” Tony asked giving her a cute look.

Precious’ face was stern

“Go!” She said

Tony smiled

“And you would be happy about it? Really?” He asked, smiling again.

“Yes” she replied again, her face straight.

Tony laughed.

“So, what is it with that face?” He asked

I smiled as I watched on.

Precious looked forlorn and her face misty

“Aunty, are you crying?” I asked and everyone turned to look at her.

She didn’t say anything

“Awwwwwnnnn, she would miss me” Tony smiled and it was touching.

“I won’t” she retorted

“So why were you crying?” He teased on

” Because I don’t like long distance courtship. I like it when both parties are around” she explained and we all smiled

“Its the same as saying you would seriously miss him my dear” daddy said

“I definitely would” she confessed

Tony covered his face babyishly

“Were you shy before?” Ruby asked, a smile etched on his face.

“Not shy. You guys tend to start feeling yourselves. Its that feeling that I hate” She confessed again.

We all laughed loudly.

“You guys wouldnt even let someone sleep” Mum muttered as she stretched.

We all rushed towards her bed, giggling happily.

“I think this would be a nice shot if snapped” Gem said.

“Who would be the photographer?” Tony asked

“Ruby” Gem and I echoed.

He frowned

“Why? I wouldn’t be in the whole scenario then? Mbanu!”

“Not to worry children. We are all going to show in it. There is a selfie stick in that wardrobe, Emerald, bring it. You are the last born here” Dad intervened and I stood up.

We started taking as many shots as possible.

It was really a time worth living and I really felt alive like a member of a real family!

Mum and even we the children were no longer candles in the wind but now, I felt like we were like a gasoline lamp that even the surrounding insects could only perch on but can’t attack anymore.

All thanks to God the greatest restorer!


Please leave a comment if you were blessed by this!

Author: Oyekunle Lizzy Oyebola

I am Lizzy but you can call me Lizziefreezie.

Writing stories that would touch you, inspire you, make you cry, laugh and which in summary draw you into their own world is all I crave to do.

I am a graduate of one of the prestigious private universities in Nigeria- Bowen University, Iwo, Osun State, Nigeria.

I can act different roles in dramas and you would see me on your screens soon…*smiles* I love to teach and re-model lives of the youths through His grace; I am also good at catering services- for your parties and occasion; I love to present programmes, advertise, sing, write and of course, PRAY!

I would love to meet you all as your lives are being touched for the better.

You are welcome to my world!!!


62 thoughts on “Story: The Candle in the Wind….(Final Episode – Episode 17) ( By Oyekunle Lizzy Oyebola)

  1. Hello Lizzyfreezie, i don’t know when i wrote this story, but i just finished reading all the episodes and i am powerfully blessed by this story. i know such wisdom to weave stories like this can only come from the Most High. I bless you Lord for the life of your daughter Elizabeth, i pray for more anointing upon her and may her wellspring of wisdom never run dry in Jesus name, Amen!!! Lord, i earnestly covet such blessedly relevant gift. thank You Father.

  2. Glory To God. . .i’m so blessed with this piece. .may God your light in your darkest hour, in jesus Name.

  3. Wow! Am so blessed by this story, God is really great and His wonderous works are way beyond our expectations. Thank you so much sister for this wonderful story and may God continue to bless you and gift you more inspiration to write more stories like this.

  4. God bless you real good you will never know a better yesterday in Jesus’ name…. Keep shinning for God

  5. That was a nice piece my dear. It shook me to my bones.. …..ride on dear, the Lord is your strength and courage

  6. This is really really awesome. One of the best stories I’ve ever read. it’s educating, spiritual, awesome, in fact, can’t mention it all. I learnt a lot from it. God bless you OYEKUNLE LIZZY OYEBOLA. God bless you abundantly. Your gift will continue to increase even far more than your expectations. God bless you always. ILoveYou!

  7. God bless you richly..am kinda in a sore mood, this story uplifted my spirits and ministered to me @ the right time. Thank you

  8. Really blessed, indeed he is the master planner hu can turn a white man into a black in just a couple of seconds. more grace Lizzie.

  9. God is great!!! Your strory is one that reminds me/ us of His promises and the need to hold on to Him. Am blessed!

  10. Wow! this is soul lifting, touching and an eye opener. Sis Lizzy u’ve got a great gift and dis story has really been a blessing more grace….

  11. This is d best story Av ever read, so impacting, inspiring, and timely. God bless u. I just pray these kind of inspirational articles will be poured out the more instead of ‘porn-like’ articles. Expecting more from gosplebreeds…lizzy, more grease

  12. This has greatly blessed me. God would keep you and grant you greater insight and inspiration. So much love

  13. This is worth more than a year sermon in the church. I never cried like this before after reading or seeing a movie no matter how spirit filled it is. But I cried on this, God is using you to re-awaken the dead parts of my life. May His ANNOINTING continually flow in your life

  14. I was really inspired through this story. Learnt a lot from it.God bless you more with wisdom , knowledge n understanding to write more. Looking forward for another story. Thumbs up.

  15. Omo when I was feeling the form to comment I was so serious as if I was sitting for an examination..
    I loveeeeedddddddd this mehn it was mad,crazy,inspiring,I laughed hard and I cried and I almost felt like falling in love. God bless you for this,you just made my week and I feel like hugging,holding and even kissing you right now. I love you and I wouldn’t mind getting more and am sending this story to all the group’s I am on what’s app asap

  16. Really an anointed writer….beyond the letters, the words are life. God bless you and may this gift always find express for the kingdom in Jesus name

  17. This story is extremly beautiful,i love every part of it.Could u believe i laugh,smile nd even cry nd i also gained a lot 4rm it.God bless u,more grace

  18. This is a great piece.. Creative and life changing…It had me glued to my phone from the beginning to the end…I’m wowed!!…God bless your hands!!

  19. Dis really touched me. I thought I was lost n dat God cud no longer use me. ur piece just made me know dat I v to hold on to God again, listen to him n watch him act by fulfilling his promises. please Lizzy, wud u let me share ur story to a religious body n group? it just might help a soul. Also pls send me ur stories to my email. wish I cud meet u in person so u assist me sort somethings abt my life n walk with God. tnx, waiting fr ur reply

  20. this is a very inspiring and touching story.i learnt a lot both spiritually and physically.may God give more inspiration to continue touching lives with your gift

  21. I can write a whole book of the lessons I have learnt from this story. many where even part of my life story……Thank u so much, I was blessed and I still remain blessed

  22. Even though i am a muslim, i still find this very interesting and educating. I have learnt from it and i appreciate the writer’s wisdom. May Almighty Allah increase your knowledge and bless you beyond borders. Amen

    1. A big THANK YOU for taking out time to read this also through despite the religion-difference. I really appreciate your humility Karremot Oriade.

      Please endevour to check back for more always 😀 Kudos to the writer also (Oyekunle Lizzy Oyebola)

  23. This is really a wonderful piece,I can’t really get tired of reading I ova & ova.more grease 2 ur hand & mind 4 d luvly inspiration.
    Can’t wait 4 more.

  24. Your story is very interesting and inspiring,may the Lord bless you real good and continue to use you greatly in His vineyard.

  25. This is so amazing!!! I stumbled on this while I was viewing Nairalandforum. I just want to say GOD BLESS YOU. The story comes in at a time I was reflecting on my spiritual stand with GOD. May the Lord continue to grant you more wisdom and knowledge. Stay blessed.

  26. This is wonderful, very touching. It’s been long I read a short novel that touched me like this. God bless you

  27. I really enjoyed the candle in the wind..it so interesting, I learnt so much from it..God bless you

    1. Amen…All the thanks to God for granting the writer (Oyekunle Lizzy Oyebola) such an inspiration, strength and grace to see this through.
      We really appreciate your time Chioma nba. Have a great weekend!

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